Spitwriting: Cruelty Ver.02

Post #08.2

Topic: Cruelty

Time Limit: 30 seconds

Wake the monster within and you shall face the greatest cruelty in mankind.

I couldn’t resist! >.< Sorry! 😛 Made a smaller version… yes, I did place this as well in the group just to satisfy them and me that MAAAN! I did it in the 30 second mark! 😛 hehe Wohooo! 🙂

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Spitwriting: Cruelty Ver.01

Post #08.1

Topic: Cruelty

Time Limit: 30 seconds

I silently looked back at her. Staring at her…and then and there I tried all I can muster. A question I always wanted to ask her but couldn’t quite say it through all this year.

“Why do this to yourself? The need to be so hard on yourself and criticism is all you do to yourself. Everything is not good enough for you. Why put pain on you? Why such cruelty?”

I gave all I can and just stumbled from all the energy drained from just uttering those words. She just kept staring back.

“Because you let me.” She answered back.

I tried to look up and look at her. Asking myself how did it come to this. Why would she say those horrible things.

Then it dawned on me, it was my reflection all along. No, the monster within me. She has taken almost all of me.

I kinda thought this was unfair… 30 seconds? Really. Well I know you can come up with something in 30 seconds because the first few words I thought to put in were:

“Just look at yourself in the mirror and wake the monster” or “Inside of you” something like that. But I wanted to have some sort of storytelling…a bit of drama… a bit of a build up so it kinda took long. 😛 hehe

I think I finished in about 3-4mins and 30 seconds or something. Not so bad right? 😛 C’mon…i did think of something short right? 😛 

I am just a sucker on reflection and self v.s. self nowadays! 😛 (Or maybe, I just love those reflection-eque kind of genre or things) Shooocks! Maybe I’ve got some feels within me. Some demons inside of me I need to figure out and face. 😛 It’s still a nice inspiration for writing right?

Experiences? huh? Hmmm…

Let me ponder on that 🙂

Spitwriting: Shrivel

Post #06

Topic: Shrivel

Time Limit: 2.5-  3 mins

I’ve seen it all.

Flower…leaves…confidence…self-esteem… and especially a person

All of them shrivel and once they do, it’s as they never existed.

They all say that if they they are in this state, all your life slips away. Only death awaits.

And now, my time has come, I in fact don’t see that.

You see, it’s at the time you shrivel away, you reflect upon your life. Appreciate and enjoy it until you’re last breathe.

Gaaahh! Didn’t quite like how it turned out. Not only am I conscious of the fact I wanted to keep staying on the time limit but my brain is not functioning properly at the moment. One,  I am sick, and two, nothing is going inside my head. Pretty much just pitch black and I’ve used all my creative power supply. 

Kinda need to recharge (sleep…sleep…sleep) and supply new creativity power. 🙂

Til next time guys! 😀 Sorry for this BLAAARGGG! 😛 hehe 

Spitwriting: Inside

Post #3 Day 02

(There is actually a slight additional rule now. TWO TOPIC in one day. So this is my second post for the day)

Topic: Inside

Time Limit: 2-3 mins.

We’ve been looking at it for a long time. We couldn’t understand why it was taking this long and why it didn’t work at all. We’ve done all the possibilities, creatively and technically. I mean this isn’t supposed to be hard for, us artists, right? And that’s when my blood started to boil towards the man in front of us.

The man kept us in this room to keep thinking until we get the right answer. And in that moment, this room turned to be our hell.

“Professor, we’ve been here for hours. We’ve told you, all the ideas we can come up with it?”

“Aren’t we at least close to the answer?”

“Apparently, my dear boy. You’ve gone so far.”

“But we’ve thought everything…everything out of the box!” One of my class mate shouted in frustration.

“That’s the thing my dear students. You’ve thought too much that you’ve gone too far.” He smiled. “It is perfectly fine to go further. However, sometimes the answer is inside the box. It is something, right in front of you. You needn’t to look any further.”

And I read out the question on the blackboard again.

“what is beyond that door?”

And that’s when he opened the door and said: “The Hallway, other students, the locker… to name a few.” He gave a sincere smile.

Maaan! I exceeded the time limit. I was doing this for 8-10 mins! 😦 Daaarn! I had the idea but executing it was quite a tricky business! Thank goodness these things help you get better in these kind of situation but still I think, I like these exercise more to help me think of stories in different topics. 🙂 So I guess, everything is all good! 😀 hihi

I am not so happy though how I executed it. If i could fix it a bit maybe I can make it work. Maybe next time! 😉 I had to finish it for the post and to do the exercise so there ya go!